First 25 Pages Critique

It’s possible to tell a lot about a manuscript based on the first twenty-five pages. This critique service offered with a quick turn-around time could be just what you need to strengthen your story without a hefty price tag. While a critique of the first twenty-five pages can never replace a full manuscript critique or developmental edit, it can point out weak spots that might keep a reader from continuing. It can also turn up foundational problems that will affect the rest of the manuscript.

This critique will consider potential problem areas such as:

  • POV,

  • opening scene,

  • scene vs. summary,

  • showing vs. telling,

  • world building without info dumping,

  • character development,

  • pacing,

  • and much more.

If you’d like to know more or book this service, please fill out the contact form below. I will reply as soon as possible with availability options.

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